Question

假設(shè)你是李華，給你的筆友Tom寫(xiě)封信告訴他你怎樣使身體保持健康。60個(gè)詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出。建議從運(yùn)動(dòng)和飲食方面入手。
參考詞匯：habits, be good for, do sports, keep fit, get more fruit and vegetables, favorite
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you how to keep healthy in my daily life.
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Yours,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you how to keep healthy in my daily life.
I often do sports to keep healthy. My favoutite sport is running. I run every day in the park. It can help to build me up and now I feel well and look fit.
Food can give us energy. I like eating more fruit and vegetables and less meat. And I also drink enough water every day. So I am very healthy, because I have healthy eating habits.
Best wishes.
Yours,
LiHua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照要求給筆友寫(xiě)一封信，說(shuō)明自己是如何保持健康的。寫(xiě)作中要按照題干的要求重點(diǎn)從運(yùn)動(dòng)和飲食方面進(jìn)行陳述，表達(dá)出自己良好的生活習(xí)慣等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要是第一人稱(chēng)，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了自己的生活方式，敘述了自己是怎樣保持健康的。文中所要求的運(yùn)動(dòng)和飲食方面都得到了說(shuō)明，符合文章的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含副詞、連詞以及形容詞比較級(jí)的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如build me up，feel well and look fit.，And，also，So，more fruit and vegetables and less meat.，，學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。