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【題目】書面表達(dá)

旅游不僅可以放松我們的心情，還可以開闊我們的視野，豐富我們的知識。去年暑假你和你的父母乘飛機(jī)去北京游玩了兩天。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，要求要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，表達(dá)流暢，字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右。

要點(diǎn)：

1.第一天我們?nèi)ヅ篱L城，并且拍了許多照片，很累但是很快樂。

2.第二天我們參觀了頤和園（The Summer Palace）人很多。 看到很多花，景色非常漂亮。我們了解到了很多關(guān)于我們國家的東西。

3.第三天，去購物，逛街，吃美味的食物。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last summer, we took a plane trip to Beijing. On the first day, we went to climb the Great Wall and took many photos. We were tired but very happy. On the second day, we visited the Summer Palace. There were too many people. We saw a lot of flowers and it had a very beautiful view. We learned a lot about our country there. On the third day, we went shopping in Wangfujin Street. We had delicious food there.We had a great time there.

【解析】

試題解析：這是一篇提綱式作文。要求考生按照題目的要求，寫一篇連貫的文章。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到語句通順、意思連貫，主旨健康，中心突出但同時(shí)切記不能完全照抄原文的翻譯。此外，考生在進(jìn)行寫作的時(shí)候，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，是文章的內(nèi)容更生動。