Question

【題目】提示：1享譽(yù)國內(nèi)外的著名作家；

2,1881年9月25日出生于浙江紹興. 1936年死于疾病

3,小時候家境貧寒,但他刻苦學(xué)習(xí).最初打算當(dāng)醫(yī)生,后來決定寫作.

4,著有許多小說,有些可以在中學(xué)或大學(xué)課本中見到.

參考詞匯:在國內(nèi)外at home and abroad 出生 be born 救治 cure 小說 novel

Dear Ben ,

I am very glad to receive your email

Lu Xun was a very great writer. Hope you can learn much from his novel

Yours,

Li Dan

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【答案】Dear Ben:

I am very glad to receive your email.I am writing to tell you something about Lu Xun.He was a famous writer at home and abroad.He was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang on September 25th,1881.He died of his illness.When he was young,he has a very poor family.But he studied hard.At first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people’s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he began to write articles to wake the people up. He wrote many novels in his life,some of which are found in the middle school and college textbooks. It's very beneficial to read Lu Xun's works.

Lu Xun was a very great writer. Hope you can learn much from his novels.

Yours,

Li Dan

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