Question

【題目】書面表達。

你的朋友打算這個星期天下午2:00去野營，地點就在海邊的小公園。你給Bob 寫了一封邀請信。請按照下面的線路，寫信給Bob：沿著Happy Road往前走，在紅綠燈處向左拐，在第二個拐彎處向右拐，走過橋進入Binghe Road，一直往前走，就會看到海邊的小公園。公園里鳥語花香，我們既可以泛舟湖上，也可以唱歌、跳舞、做游戲。公園里還有一個小動物園，你可以看到各種各樣的動物。長頸鹿們的長脖子幫助它們吃樹上的葉子；猴子跳來跳去，引人發(fā)笑；大象的大耳朵就像張開的扇子。我確定這會非常有趣。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

I am very glad to invite you to a picnic. We will have the picnic in the small park near the sea at 2:00 p.m this Sunday. Here is the way to it: Go along Happy Road and take the second turning on the right. Walk across the bridge into Binghe Road. Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The park is very beautiful. We can go boating there, and we can also sing, dance and play games. There is a small zoo in the park, so we can see all kinds of animals. We will see the giraffes. Their long necks help them eat the leaves from the tree. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. The elephants’ ears are like open fans. I hope you can come to have a good time with us.

Yoursfaithfully,

Tim

【解析】

本篇作文主要講述了星期天要和朋友去野營, 想邀請Bob去參加，并給他交代了地址和那里比較好玩的地方。寫作時注意條理清晰，和漢譯英的正確性，注意且不可逐條翻譯，注意句子和句子之間的連貫性。本文兩點：首先在格式上符合書信要求，思路條理清晰。句式也體現(xiàn)了多樣性，例如Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. 在語句之間使用了一些例如and, so, 等連詞，使文章具有連貫性，是一篇很不錯的文章。