Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你就讀的學校是一所歷史悠久的學校，校園環(huán)境優(yōu)美，教師經(jīng)驗豐富，教室寬敞明亮，教學設備先進，圖書館有大量藏書，你對這一切都很滿意，但是，學校要求住校生每天早晨5:30起床鍛煉，為此同學們議論紛紛，請你用e-mail向校長闡述你贊成或反對的理由。詞數(shù)100左右。電子郵件的開頭和落款已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

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Date:	September 18	From:	Li Hua	To:	Headmaster	Subject:	Advice
Dear Sir, I am very honoured to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours tryly, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am very honoured to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history. There are lots of evergreen trees on the beautiful campus. We have many experienced teachers who are kind, enthusiastic and easy-going. There are many spacious and bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment in the teaching building. In the school library, there are a large number of books we can borrow twice a week. I am amazed and satisfied with all these. But the students living at school have to get up early to take exercise. I don’t think it’s a good idea. If we get up so early, we’ll feel sleepy in class. In fact, it’s necessary for us students to have enough sleep. What’s more, from morning to night we have little time to arrange our own life. We know health is the first wealth, but we can do more to keep fit in our spare time instead of getting up early for exercise.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文要求同學們寫一封電子郵件，內容是贊成或反對學校讓學生早起鍛煉并闡述理由。同學們在寫作時要求做到格式規(guī)范、論據(jù)充分。具體寫作思路如下：

第一步：審題

體裁：說明文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結構：總分

第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）

be honored to do sth/ has a long history/ experienced/ kind and enthusiastic/ advanced teaching equipment/ a large number of/ have access to/ take exercise/ be satisfied with/ have enough sleep/ keep fit/ feel sleepy

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am very honored to study in our school, which is famous and has a long history.

2. There are lots of evergreen trees on the beautiful campus.

3. We have many experienced teachers who are kind, enthusiastic and easy-going.

4. There are many spacious and bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment in the teaching building.

5. In the school library, there are a wide range of books, which are accessible to all the students.

6. I am satisfied with all these.

7. However, the students who lives at school have to get up early to take exercise.

8. I don’t think it’s a good idea.

9. Getting up so early will make us feel sleepy in class.

10. As a matter of fact, it’s important for us students to have enough sleep.

11. What’s more, from morning to night we are busy, having little time to arrange our own life.

12. We know health is the first wealth, but we can do more to keep fit in our spare time instead of getting up early for exercise.