Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Tom,

I am glad to hear that you are going to Canada to study. So I was writing to tell you anything about this country.

Locating in North America, Canada is the second large country with the largest number of lakes in the world. The majority of people lives in the center of the country. However, I suggest that you chose to study in the east, because there are many international students here and the tuition is lower. During your study, you can take the part in more activities after class, where you can make more friends from different country. In this way, your life will rich and colorful

Hope you will have a wonderful life there.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I am glad to hear that you are going to Canada to study. So I writing to tell youabout this country.

in North America, Canada is the secondcountry with the largest number of lakes in the world. The majority of people in the center of the country. However, I suggest that you to study in the east, because there are many international students and the tuition is lower. During your study, you can takethepart in more activities after class, where you can make more friends from different. In this way, your life will rich and colorful.

Hope you will have a wonderful life there.

【解析】

【1】此處指“我正在寫信告訴你一些事情”，所以用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時態(tài)。故was改為am。

【2】本句是肯定句，而anything用在疑問句和否定句中。故anything改為something。

【3】locate是及物動詞，意思是“使……坐落在”，所以用過去分詞作定語。故Locating改為Located。

【4】此處指“加拿大是世界上湖泊數(shù)量最多的第二大國”，是最高級用法。故large改為largest。

【5】the majority of…作主語，謂語單復(fù)數(shù)根據(jù)of后面的名詞決定。故lives改為live。

【6】suggest后面that引起的賓語從句中謂語動詞用虛擬語氣，由should加動詞原形構(gòu)成，should可以省略。故chose改為choose。

【7】此處指“因為那兒有很多國際學(xué)生”。故here改為there。

【8】take part in是固定搭配，指“參與；參加”。故去掉the。

【9】根據(jù)different可知，此處指“不同的國家”，所以名詞用復(fù)數(shù)。故country改為countries。

【10】在情態(tài)動詞will后面要跟動詞原形而后加形容詞。故will后面加be。