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【題目】【來源】2016屆北京朝陽區(qū)高三第二次（5月）綜合練習(xí)英語卷（帶解析）

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹你在倫敦冬令營期間與同學(xué)們自行前往博物館的完整過程，并以“My Experience in London”為題，給�？�“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60； 2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My Experience in London

Last winter vacation, my classmates and I went to London to attend a winter camp.

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【答案】

One possible version:

My experience in London

Last winter vacation, my classmates and I went to London to attend a winter camp.

To better understand the history and culture of the city, we scheduled a “museum trip”. On Saturday morning we got up early and studied the map carefully to work out the route. One of my classmates suggested going there by bus to enjoy the street view. It was a long ride, so when we got off the double-decker bus, we seemed to lose our way. The streets looked busy and strange, and we had to ask a passerby for help. She pointed out the right direction and wished us a good day. Thanks to the friendly woman, we finally got to our destination.

It took us some effort, but we witnessed the real beauty of the city. The experience also enabled us to practice our English. What a terrific experience!

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇圖畫作文，觀察圖片上提示的要點應(yīng)該包括1. 查地圖；2. 乘公交；3. 問路；4. 到達。本文應(yīng)該用一般過去時。注意增加細節(jié)，使銜接合理，還要盡量用高中階段學(xué)習(xí)詞匯和句型。注意長短搭配。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)明確，思路清晰。分三段把內(nèi)容要點都涵蓋了。同時注意應(yīng)用較高級的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如scheduled，work out，suggested going，Thanks to， It took us some effort, but ，和witnessed等等。并注意了句子的變化和銜接如so。