【題目】假定你是李華,你的語(yǔ)文老師Mr.Li受邀于三月初去英國(guó)一所學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流。他將做關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的報(bào)告,并與英國(guó)學(xué)生互動(dòng)(interact)。他請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給對(duì)方負(fù)責(zé)人Ms. Jenkins寫(xiě)一封郵件,希望提前安排好。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Ms. Jenkins.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【答案】One Possible version

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

On behalf of my Chinese teacher, Mr. Li, I am writing to inform you that he will be invited to visit your school in early March. I am delighted to tell you what he has arranged.

As a learned scholar, Mr. Li will deliver a speech about traditional Chinese culture, talking about the history of Chinese characters, paintings and Tang poetry. After that, he will interact with some students from England in your school hall, which will surely promote the cultural communication between two schools.

How do you like the plan? I sincerely hope you could make arrangements in advance.

Yours sincerely,

【解析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文類(lèi)作文,具體寫(xiě)作如下:

步驟1.認(rèn)真審題,確定文章體裁和主題。內(nèi)容是你的語(yǔ)文老師Mr.Li受邀于三月初去英國(guó)一所學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流。他將做關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的報(bào)告,并與英國(guó)學(xué)生互動(dòng)(interact)。他請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給對(duì)方負(fù)責(zé)人Ms. Jenkins寫(xiě)一封郵件,希望提前安排好。據(jù)此判斷文章要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱(chēng)。

步驟2.在草稿紙上列出表達(dá)要點(diǎn)以及所需要的短語(yǔ)和句型,并適當(dāng)拓展。注意合適的時(shí)態(tài)。

步驟3.將語(yǔ)言材料組合連貫,加上恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞,過(guò)渡句。

步驟4.最后仔細(xì)讀一遍草稿并修改錯(cuò)誤。

需要注意的問(wèn)題:

1. 注意書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚、工整、美觀,給閱卷者很好的第一印象分會(huì)提高打分檔次。

2. 注意劃分段落,不要一段到底,一般寫(xiě)三段。

3. 注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮。

4. 在確保語(yǔ)法句法正確的前提下,適當(dāng)選用高級(jí)詞匯和句型,如倒裝句,強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等,可增加得分亮點(diǎn)。

5. 盡量不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。注意主謂一致,動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ),上下文人稱(chēng)和數(shù)一致等問(wèn)題。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),大小寫(xiě)字母規(guī)范正確。

6. 平時(shí)注意各類(lèi)相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)背誦和積累優(yōu)美詞句。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上清晰流暢,而且要點(diǎn)全面。文章層次分明,條理清晰。此外賓語(yǔ)從句that he will be invited to visit your school和what he has arranged,定語(yǔ)從句which wills surely promote the cultural communication以及非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的使用talking about the history都是文章的亮點(diǎn)。不僅如此,文中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ):on behalf of,inform,am delighted to, deliver a speech,interact with, promote, make arrangement, in advance 不僅反映出作者詞匯的豐富,而且也使文章更加簡(jiǎn)潔明了,清晰易懂。總之這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。

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