Question

假定你是李津。請(qǐng)你給你的美籍同學(xué)Peter發(fā)一個(gè)e-mail，告訴他周日在你們市體育館有一場(chǎng)中韓男子籃球賽，并邀請(qǐng)他一起去觀看。
內(nèi)容包括：
1．比賽開始時(shí)間：周日上午9點(diǎn)；
2．詢問Peter是否感興趣：
3．如果Peter答應(yīng)看球賽，你將提前購票，并在體育館入口處等他。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：韓國Korea 體育館stadium
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?                                                       
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I’m looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea in the stadium of our city this Sunday. It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball stars will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for us to watch them playing live. I like basketball very much and I know basketball is also your favorite sport, so I am inviting you to watch the game. If you are interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can buy the tickets ahead of time. The match starts at nine o’clock in the morning and I’ll wait for you at the entrance to the stadium at half past eight.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，請(qǐng)你給你的美籍同學(xué)Peter發(fā)一個(gè)e-mail，告訴他周日在你們市體育館有一場(chǎng)中韓男子籃球賽，并邀請(qǐng)他一起去觀看。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：as soon as possible 盡快，ahead of time提前， I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea in the stadium of our city this Sunday.這句話用了同位語從句， It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball stars will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for us to watch them playing live. 這句話用了兩個(gè)it做形式主語， If you are interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can buy the tickets ahead of time.這句話用了結(jié)果狀語從句。