Question

19．假定你是李華，你的外教Mr．Frank回國前向你推薦了American School Life網(wǎng)站，希望你借此提高英語水平．請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的收獲，要點如下：
1 表達思念；
2 上網(wǎng)收獲；
3 表示感激．
注意：1 詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Frank，
It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be beneficial to對…有益；broaden my horizon拓展了我的視野； become   interested in對…感興趣；Besides另外；Thanks to幸虧，由于；look  forward to 盼望；
The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）
It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）
  Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Frank，
      It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
      The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．（高分句型一）It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．（高分句型二）Now I has become more interested in English．Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．Now I can express myself much better than ever．
     Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．（高分句型三）I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 （一）表達慰問：好久不見，近來可好？
常用句式：
It's a fairly long time since …自從…已經(jīng)有很長一段時間
Leave someplace            離開某地  
成句：It's a fairly long time since you left our school．
補充：
1）我非常想念您．
I miss you very much．
2）表示問候．
Is everything going well？
（二）感謝原因一：你給我推薦的網(wǎng)站對我?guī)椭�很大�?br />有用句式：
sth．is beneficial to      …很有用
recommend             推薦
成句：The website you've recommended to me is very beneficial to my English study．
補充：
網(wǎng)站上有很豐富的閱讀材料，極大地開闊了我的眼界．
abundant  豐富的
greatly 極大地
broaden one's horizon 開闊眼界
成句：It has abundant reading materials that I need most，greatly broadening my horizon．
    現(xiàn)狀：
現(xiàn)在我對英語更有興趣了．
be interested in對…..有興趣
成句：
Now I has become more interested in English．
感謝原因二：我還交了很多新朋友，還談了很多關(guān)于學(xué)校生活和文化科學(xué)的內(nèi)容．
Besides/what's more/Also此外（表過渡）
Make many new friends交到很多新朋友
補充：
communicate a lot  談?wù)摿撕芏?br />句子整合：Besides，I've made many new friends and we communicate a lot about school life，cultures，science，and so on．
     現(xiàn)狀：
現(xiàn)在我能更好地表達自己．
Now I can express myself much better than ever．
（四）重申感謝：多虧了您的關(guān)心，我在英語學(xué)習(xí)上取得很大進步．
Thanks to    多虧
Kindness and consideration   關(guān)心
Make rapid progress  取得很大進步
成句：
Thanks to your kindness and consideration，I've made rapid progress in English study．
補充：
Owe to…歸功于
Look forward to…
成句：
I owe all my achievements to you．I'm looking forward to more advice from you!
我現(xiàn)在取得的成績?nèi)�仰賴您，期待您能給我更多的建議．