Question

19．假如你是我市一名高三學(xué)生李華，你打算報(bào)考一所外語學(xué)院．你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上看到上海外國語學(xué)院的招生信息（admission information），并對此非常感興趣．根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語撰寫一份個(gè)人申請報(bào)告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
    1．記述自己的個(gè)性特長及取得的成果；
    2．說明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：不少于120；開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
    2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to study in your university．I read about the admission information （招生信息）while surfing the net the other day．I'm really interested in it．
On the one hand，I'm an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates．On the other hand，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English．I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies．Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther．King（馬丁路德金），President Bush（布什總統(tǒng)） and so on，are also my favorite．What's more，I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances．
As we all know，English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people，so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university．I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote宣傳 cultural communication 文化交流between China and the world．
 
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們向上海外國語學(xué)院寫一份個(gè)人申請報(bào)告，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：記述自己的個(gè)性特長及取得的成果，說明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想．首先總體介紹自己特長，然后介紹取得的成果，最后說明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為自己的個(gè)性特長及取得的成果．第二部分為進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
apply to  申請
On the one hand…On the other hand…一方面…另一方面
 get on well with 與…相處的好
What's more而且，此外
intend to major in English  打算主修英語
be admitted into 被錄取
Speeches （delivered by famous people ）are also my favorite著名人物發(fā)表的演講也是我的最愛．此句為過去分詞作后置定語．
I once won the first prize for English speech contest （held in our city ）此句也是過去分詞作后置定語．
I want to have a job （which is related to languages ）in the future 此句為定語從句．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to study in your university． I read about the admission information （招生信息）while surfing the net the other day．I'm really interested in it．
On the one hand，I'm an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates．On the other hand，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English．I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies．Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther．King（馬丁路德金），President Bush（布什總統(tǒng)） and so on，are also my favorite．（介紹自己的個(gè)性特長）What's more，I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances．（取得的成果）
As we all know，English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people，so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university．I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote宣傳 cultural communication 文化交流between China and the world．（進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想）I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．

點(diǎn)評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．