Question

20．五、基礎(chǔ)寫作 
寫作內(nèi)容
目前，越來(lái)越多的青少年參加各類電視節(jié)目的才藝表演（talent shows）．對(duì)此，中學(xué)生的看法各有不同．

贊同	不贊同
展示才藝，增加社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)； 增強(qiáng)自信； 有利于學(xué)生全面（overall adj．）發(fā)展．	模仿多，沒(méi)有自己的風(fēng)格； 沉迷于"明星夢(mèng)"，無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)； 有上當(dāng)受騙的危險(xiǎn)．

寫作要求
必須用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容；
將5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．1．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇帶有表格的作文題，通過(guò)表格內(nèi)容可知不同人對(duì)talent shows有不同看法．寫作時(shí)，先闡述兩種人不同的觀點(diǎn)，并列出每種觀點(diǎn)的理由．最后發(fā)表自己的看法．
高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和高分句型：
an increasing number of  越來(lái)越多
take part in 參加
contribute to 對(duì)…貢獻(xiàn)
imitate 模仿
rather than 而不是
put heart and soul into全身心投入
高分句型：①Some think it is a stage to show…，contributing much to their…
   contributing to 現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)  
②other students hold the different idea that…
that 引導(dǎo)一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句，為idea 的內(nèi)容，

解答 At present，an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows，about which students‘opinions are divided．（贊同觀點(diǎn)）①Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art，contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence．What's more，（理由）it's good for their overall development．
      However，（不贊同觀點(diǎn)） ②other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original．Besides，（列舉理由） some are such"star dream"followers that they can't put their heart and soul into their study，thus affecting their study badly．
    （自己的觀點(diǎn)） In my opinion，important as study is，it's not the only thing we can do．It's preferable to explore our abilities in other areas besides study．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．