Question

【題目】世界動物保護協(xié)會（World Society for the Protection of Animals）正面向全球招募中學生志愿者。假設你是新華中學高三學生李華，有意參加該組織。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，用英語給該組織負責人寫一封申請信。

內(nèi)容要點：

★簡要自我介紹；

★申請的理由（熱愛動物、參加過保護動物的社會實踐活動等）；

★你的打算。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右。書信格式已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 請在答題卡上做答。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a Senior 3 student at Xinhua High School. I am eager to join your organization and I will try my best to call on others to protect animals.

I think I am qualified for the job, because I like animals very much and I have been calling on people around me to show mercy to animals. I also have the experience of raising animals. Sharing the experience with others will certainly help a lot.

If I have the opportunity to work with you, I will do everything I can to raise people’s awareness of animal protection such as making speeches in my school and posting on the Internet. In addition, I will use all the resources available to appeal more and more people to join our organization. I strongly hope I can join your organization and make a great contribution to animals. And I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查的是申請信的書寫，主題是寫一封申請世界動物保護協(xié)會志愿者的信。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力�？忌�首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：am eager to急于，try my best to盡全力，call on，am qualified for有資格，show mercy to同情，raise people’s awareness of提高人們的意識，make a great contribution to做貢獻，looking forward to盼望著，If I have the opportunity to work with you, I will do everything I can是一句從句，并且文章運用了In addition等連接詞來使條理更加清晰。