Question

假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點寫一封信：
1.本人簡介；    2.求助內(nèi)容；    3.約定時間；  
4.你的聯(lián)系方式（Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678）
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；  2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Look forward to your reply.

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no lessons on Tuesday mornigs and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here are my e-mail address and phone number: Email:lihua@126.com; Phone:12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點，完成試題任務(wù)，達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫作目的。在寫作時，考生應(yīng)該留心是否要點完整，是否有要點遺漏。在題示要點完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料為中心進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。在信中注意寫作的語氣及時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如taking summer courses, ask for help, I have some difficulties with, Look forward to your reply， I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.還運用了Here are my e-mail address and phone number倒裝句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：But；and等等。
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