Question

20．下面短文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like tell you something about it．Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 文章是一封寫給朋友的信．介紹了自己新住所的基本情況，一室一廳，一廚一衛(wèi)．房子不大，但作者非常喜歡．

解答 Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like∧tell you something about it．
                                                                                             加to
Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．
Located                                                                                                        buildings
My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．
                                  an                                           on
It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．
    consists
When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．
                        去掉
The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，
                                                                                    bright
which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．
where
Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
                                                   it
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．
1．加to．短語搭配，would like to do想要做某事．
2．locating改為located．短語搭配，be located in坐落于，be動(dòng)詞省略了．
3．building改為buildings．前面有six，building大樓，可數(shù)名詞，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
4．the改為an．短語搭配，an area of一片區(qū)域，一塊面積，表示泛指．
5．in改為on．在樓上，用介詞on．
6．consisted改為consists．時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，文章講述的客觀現(xiàn)實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
7．into去掉．enter是及物動(dòng)詞，直接帶賓語，不需要介詞．
8．brightly改為bright．句中是作系動(dòng)詞的表語，要用形容詞．
9．which改為where．題干是一個(gè)定語從句，從句主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要用關(guān)系副詞．
10．them改為it．指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是my flat單數(shù)名詞，要用it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查學(xué)生的語篇理解和語言運(yùn)用能力．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)）；動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配）；代詞（不定代詞，人稱代詞）；形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)化）；連詞（and，but，or）；冠詞（an，a，the）等．解題時(shí)，要把握好句子結(jié)構(gòu)，以動(dòng)詞為中心．動(dòng)詞和與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中占很大的比例．