分析 本文主要講述作者在寒冷的天氣里看到清潔工人們打掃大街,想為他們做點(diǎn)什么.因此,他和同學(xué)們遞給清潔工熱粥,向他們表達(dá)自己的感激.
解答 It was extreme cold last Monday morning.While I was walking in my way to school,I noticed two street cleaners sweeping the street.Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning,I was moved and made up my mind∧do something for them.After arriving at school,I discussed with some classmates that we could do.The next day,we got up early and preparing porridge at home.When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work,they looked a little surprising at first.And then they took a porridge and thanked us happily.Since it was very cold,we all felt warm at that moment.
詳解:
1.extreme改為extremely 考查形容詞.cold為形容詞,應(yīng)用副詞修飾形容詞.
2.in改為on 考查介詞.on one's way to意為"在某人去…的路上",是固定搭配.
3.去掉are 考查句子結(jié)構(gòu).此處是感官動(dòng)詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):感官動(dòng)詞+名詞+doing,are是多余的.
4.mind后加to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式.make up one's mind to do sth.意為"下定決心做某事",是固定搭配.
5.that改為what 考查連詞.do缺少賓語,用what作其賓語,同時(shí)what引導(dǎo)賓語從句.
6.preparing改為prepared 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài).a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞,它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分,got和prepared是并列謂語,都用一般過去時(shí).
7.us改為our 考查代詞.根據(jù)句意:我們遞給清潔工熱粥,向他們表達(dá)我們的感激.用代詞our.
8.surprising改為surprised 考查過去分詞. 過去分詞作表語,多半用來表示人物所處的心理狀態(tài)或情感變化,其主語多半是人.
9.a(chǎn)改為the 考查冠詞.porridge因前面已提到,其前加定冠詞the表示特指.
10.since改為although/though 考查連詞.根據(jù)句意:盡管很冷,但那一刻我們都感覺很溫暖.用連詞although/though.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò).其次,要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò).這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.
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Subject:Slimming down classics? | |
Mr. Handsome 2007-5-12 6:34AM | Orion Books,which decides there is a market in creating cut-down classics (經(jīng)典著作),is slimming down some novels by such great writers as L.Tolstoy,M.Mitchell and C.Bronte.Now,each of them has been whittled down to about 400pages by cutting 30to 40pages per cent of original,with words,sentences,paragraphs and,in a few cases,chapters removed.The first six shortened editions,all priced at£6.99and advertised as great reads"in half the time",will go on sale next month,with plans for 50to 100more to follow.The publishing house believes that modern readers will welcome the shorter versions. |
Mr. Edwards 2007-5-12 9:40AM | Well,I'm publisher of Orion Group.Thanks for your attention,Mr.Handsome. I must say,the idea developed from a game of"shame"in my office.Each of us was required to confess (承認(rèn)) to the most embarrassing blanks in his or her reading.I admitted that I had never read Anna Karenina and tried but failed to get through Gone with the Wind several times.One of my colleagues acknowledged skipping (跳讀) Jane Eyre.We realized that life is too short to read all the books you want to and we never were going to read these ones. As a leading publishing house,we are trying to make classics convenient for readers but it's not as if we're withdrawing the original versions.They are still there if you want to read them. |
Ms.Weir 2007-5-12 11:35AM | I'm director of the online book club www.lovereading.co.uk Mr.Edwards,I think your shortened editions is a breath of fresh air.I'm guilty of never having read Anna Karenina,because it's just so long.I'd much rather read two 300-page books than one 600-page book.I am looking forward to more shortened classics! |
Mr. Crockatt 2007-5-12 4:38PM | I'm from the London independent bookshop Crockatt & Powell. In my opinion,the practice is completely ridiculous.How can you edit the classics?I'm afraid reading some of these books is hard work,and that is why you have to develop as a reader.If people don't have time to read Anna Karenina,then fine.But don't read a shortened version and kid yourself it's the real thing. |
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