Question

9．閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
"Can I see my baby？"asked the happy new mother．The bundle（嬰兒包）was placed in her arms and when she moved the fold of cloth to look upon his tiny face，she gasped-the baby has been born without ears．Time，however，proved that the baby's hearing was perfect except his appearance．
One day when he rushed home from school and threw himself into his mother's arms，he cried out bitterly，"A boy，a big boy…called me a f-…freak．"She sighed，knowing that his life was to be endless of heartbreaks．
He grew up，handsome for his misfortune．A favorite with his fellow students，he might have been class president，but for that．He developed a gift for literature and music．
The boy's father had a talk with he family doctor．Could nothing be done？"I believe we could graft（移植）on a pair of outer ears，if they could be donated，"the doctor decided．So the search began for a person who would make such a sacrifice a young man．Two years went by．Then，"You're going to the hospital，son．Mother and I have someone who will donate the ears you need．Bt it's a secret，"said the father．
The operation was a brilliant success．His talents blossomed （開花）into genius．School and college became a series of successes．Later he married and entered the diplomatic（外交）service．"But I must know!"he urged his father．"Who gave so much for me？I could never do enough for him．"
"I do not believer you could，"said the father，"but the agreement was that you are not to know…．not yet．"The years kept the secret，but the day did come…．one of the darkest days that ever pass through a son．He stood with his father over his mother's casket（棺材）．Slowly and tenderly，the father stretched forth a hand and raised the thick，reddish-brown hair to let out the secret．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1、以約30個(gè)詞概括這個(gè)感人的故事；
2、以約120個(gè)詞，請就"在受別人的幫助中，學(xué)會了幫助別人"的話題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)你內(nèi)心的感受，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
1）你看完這個(gè)故事后，你如何評價(jià)這位母親的無私行為；
2）請以你的日常生活經(jīng)歷的事情為例，說明別人的善良行為對你的影響；
3）你的感想．
[寫作要求]
1、作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3、標(biāo)題自定．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確、語言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
Help is AlwaysUnselfish
A selfish motherdonated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it．At last，the son got the secret from his father after his mother died．
Help is alwaysunselfish．The mother donated her ears to her son，showing her greatest love toher child．From these，we can know how difficult it is for parents to raisetheir children．
In the daily life，we always get kind help from ourteachers，classmates and friends．And their kind help is always unselfish．WhenI was in Senior Middle School，I lived in the school．Every time I was ill，my teachers and classmates gave me kind help，taking goodcare of me all the time．In today's society，I was affected by some bad things，which made me think that there was no kindness in the world．It was my friendswho did everything to help me out．
From these experiences，I have realized that helpingothers is necessary，and true love does exist in our daily life．Since then，Ihave changed myself a lot，and I also give hands to others when they are inneed of help．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：donate sth to sb（捐贈），raise sb（撫養(yǎng)某人），help sb out （幫某人擺脫困境），give hands to sb（幫助某人），be in need of（需要…），all the time（一直）

解答 Help is AlwaysUnselfish
A selfish motherdonated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it．At last，the son got the secret from his father after his mother died．（概括）
Help is alwaysunselfish．The mother donated her ears to her son，showing her greatest love toher child．【高分句型】Fromthese，we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children．（評價(jià)無私母親的行為）In the daily life，we always get kind helpfrom our teachers，classmates and friends．And their kind help is alwaysunselfish．When I was in Senior Middle School，I lived inthe school．Every time I was ill，my teachers and classmates gave me kind help，taking good care of me all the time．【高分句型】In today's society，I was affected by somebad things，which made me think that there was no kindness in the world．It wasmy friends who did everything to help me out．（舉例說明被人的善舉對自己的影響）
From these experiences，I have realized that helpingothers is necessary，and true love does exist in our daily life．Since then，Ihave changed myself a lot，and I also give hands to others when they are inneed of help．（自己的感想）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．