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【題目】現(xiàn)在，越來(lái)越多的人喜歡養(yǎng)狗, 但是一些問(wèn)題也隨之而來(lái)。某英文報(bào)以此為主題舉辦征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向該報(bào)投稿，倡導(dǎo)大家文明養(yǎng)狗，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

現(xiàn)象	后果	個(gè)人看法
狗會(huì)到處亂跑； 隨處大小便。	有些狗可能會(huì)襲擊人； 動(dòng)物糞便污染環(huán)境。	……

注意: 1 . 詞數(shù)：100左右；

2 . 不要逐條翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, more and more people like to raise dogs. Dogs are often a much-loved part of many families. However, some owners allow their dogs to run around out of control, which can cause problems for others. Besides, dogs’ wastes are a serious problem because they spread disease and pollute the environment. Even worse, some dogs become aggressive and bite people, sometimes causing serious injury and even causing rabies.

To keep us safe and healthy, we should change the uncivilized way in which some people keep dogs. In my opinion, the government should take measures to bring it under control. Also, remember that if you are unfortunate enough to be bitten by a dog, you should deal with it in the proper way and go to see a doctor immediately.

【解析】

寫表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)。首先在寫正文的時(shí)候一定不要遺漏文中給出的要點(diǎn)。先將文中的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，最后要闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句要通順流暢。盡可能地避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，做到文中語(yǔ)意清楚，簡(jiǎn)單明了。此類文在寫作時(shí)主要是運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，或是用一些情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。人稱要根據(jù)內(nèi)容來(lái)定，可使用第一人稱也可使用其他人稱。在書寫時(shí)一定要盡可能地多使用高級(jí)詞匯、常用的短語(yǔ)和句型，例如本文中用了However, besides, even worse, 和under control這樣的短語(yǔ)以提高文章的可欣賞性；恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，可以讓文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。