10.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.作文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
      2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
This is my fifth day at the summer camp.Life isn't exact what I expected.We have to get up early to make our beds before our teacher Miss Li come to inspect.After breakfast,we have some of free time.Yesterday morning I went fishing,but the only thing I catch was a tree branch.In the afternoon,there are different activity like horseback riding and hiking.They're fun,so nothing new for me.In the evening,everyone is assigned a different task to get dinner ready.Yesterday,I was in charge of prepare the hot dogs,but I accidentally dropped it in the fire.The best part of camp is at night,where we sit around a campfire and tell stories.

分析 本文記敘了作者參加夏令營的一系列活動.早晨起床自己整理床鋪,釣魚只能釣到樹枝,參加遠(yuǎn)足等活動,自己準(zhǔn)備熱狗卻不小心把它掉到火里…;通過這一系列的活動,作者意識到"Life isn't what I expected"(生活不像我所期待的那樣).

解答 1.exact改為exactly;考查副詞的用法,這里應(yīng)該用副詞來修飾前面的動詞isn't.
2.come改為comes;這里考查的是句子的時態(tài),結(jié)合語境這里應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時,主語是Miss Li,故用comes.
3.去掉of;考查的是介詞的用法,結(jié)合上下文,句意為"一些空閑時間",所以some后面不能加介詞of.
4.catch改為caught,前面有時間狀語yesterday,所以要用過去時.
5.a(chǎn)ctivity改為activities;句子結(jié)構(gòu)為There are…所以后面應(yīng)該跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式.
6.so改為but;考查連詞的用法,結(jié)合句意,前后應(yīng)當(dāng)是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用but.
7.prepare改為preparing;考查介詞用法,介詞后面跟 名詞或動名詞構(gòu)成介賓結(jié)構(gòu).
8.it改為them;考查代詞的用法,這里的代詞指代前面的hot dogs,所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式them.
9.of后面the;這里考查的是冠詞的用法,camp前面加定冠詞the,表示特指文章中前面提到的.
10.where改為when,這里考查的是定語從句中關(guān)系詞的用法,先行詞是night,表示時間,故用關(guān)系副詞when.

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯時要注意一下幾點(diǎn):1.快速閱讀,整體把握短文大意.2.重視語境以及上下文的關(guān)系.3.充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出錯誤所在.

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We have been told never to put off until tomorrow what you can do today since childhood.However,there are still many people who like putting off the things that they should do today until tomorrow.They have no plans for their work and their time.As a result,they will not accomplish their goals in the end.
For example,one Sunday I felt so tired after having a football match that I did not finish my homework even at night.I thought I could get up earlier to go to school the next morning so that I could finish my homework before class.But the next morning,I was not able to get to school in time because of the traffic jam.I was punished by the teacher.It taught me a lesson.From then on I made a determination that I would never put off anything important until the next day.
Please remember:Work today,for you don't know how much you may be hindered tomorrow.Seize the present day,cherish every minute you have now and trust the tomorrow as little as possible.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1)以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容.
2)以約120詞對"今日事今日畢"展開議論,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)你讀了本篇文章后,有什么感想;
(2)談?wù)勀銓?今日事今日畢"的看法;
(3)你平時是怎樣合理安排時間,及時完成老師布置的任務(wù)的.
[寫作要求]
1)在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2)作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱.

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