Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
2騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保，有利健康等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）  節(jié)能（energy saving）
注意： 1.詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning， everyone，
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride  Bicycle”.   
                                                                              
                                                                              
Thank you !

Answer 1

不唯一
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m convened, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us.

解析試題分析：演講稿的主題部分應(yīng)該闡述清楚事情的緣由、結(jié)果和要求。以詳細(xì)完整地介紹污染給我們的生活帶來的影響。然后再敘述騎自行車的好處。發(fā)言稿以簡單句為主要的表達(dá)形式。同時，演講稿的語言必須有感染力，所以演講稿可以使用祈使句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等句式來達(dá)到這種目的。寫作時要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評：選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言，合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。