請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,簡(jiǎn)單描述一下2014年云南省魯?shù)榭h地震。

1. 地震于2014年8月3日發(fā)生在云南省魯?shù)榭h;

2. 震后發(fā)生火災(zāi)和泥石流;

3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌,馬路出現(xiàn)裂痕,水電供應(yīng)中斷;

4. 有些建筑物里的水管爆裂開來(lái),地上一些洞穴冒出了蒸汽;

5. 地震共造成617人死亡;112人失蹤,3143人受傷,還有很多無(wú)家可歸者;

6. 震后解放軍戰(zhàn)士提供救助:提供食品和水,搭建避難所。

要求:

1. 短文必須包括要點(diǎn)中的所有內(nèi)容;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容連貫;

3. 參考詞匯:泥石流mud-rock flow 縣county

4. 詞數(shù):120左右。

On August 3rd ,2014 a big earthquake hit Rudian County Yunnang Province. After the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end, because there were fires and mud-rock flow. Houses and tall buildings fell down. People found cracks on the road, which caused difficulties for driving. Water and electricity were cut off. The water pipes in some buildings cracked and burst and steam burst from holes in the ground. There were disasters everywhere. In a few seconds the whole county was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached 617. Besides, 3143 were injured and a large number of people lost their homes. Soon after the quakes, the army sent soldiers to help the rescue work. They provided food and fresh water and built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed.

【解析】:題目要求根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示完成作文,提示中提到了地震發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),地震帶來(lái)的災(zāi)害,地震后的房屋、地面以及建筑物等出現(xiàn)的不同程度的損壞情況都需要包含在文章中,記敘表達(dá)要有邏輯、順序,文章前后要連貫。并且有關(guān)地震后的傷亡情況和救援情況也需要一一的說(shuō)明。文章在包含提示的所有內(nèi)容的同時(shí)也可根據(jù)題目的背景環(huán)境,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),是文章更加的豐滿,但注意只能適當(dāng)添加。最后提示給出了文章有關(guān)的生詞,可適當(dāng)使用。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:首先文章將題目要求的所有方面都描述了,文章開頭就直奔主題。其中 “it seemed that the world was at an end”用it做形式主語(yǔ)后接了一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句,后面還用了很多短語(yǔ)如“ fell down.”“cut off”“ in ruins”“a large number of ”等。且文章使用的報(bào)道形式,讓人有身臨其境的感覺。問(wèn)題說(shuō)明:整篇文章只有一個(gè)自然段,并且只描述文章描述漢語(yǔ)提示中的內(nèi)容,句子之間缺乏必要的連接詞,銜接不夠連貫。句子過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)短,并且缺乏句型的變換,過(guò)于平實(shí)。

考點(diǎn):考查報(bào)道式應(yīng)用文寫作。

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