Question

前不久，學(xué)生會(huì)向高三學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議：十八歲生日時(shí)，請(qǐng)你為父母做一件事。同學(xué)們積極響應(yīng)，紛紛表達(dá)自己的想法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息，以“Something Special for Parents”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 描述以上有關(guān)學(xué)生會(huì)倡議的信息和同學(xué)們的反應(yīng)；
2. 作為一名高三的學(xué)生，你的做法及理由是什么。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3. 短文的標(biāo)題及開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that_______________

Answer 1

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Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that Senior Three students should do something special for their parents on their 18^th birthday. All the students were actively in response to it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter,saying it’s the best way to express their appreciation as well as love for their dearest parants. Others prefer to cook a big meal to show that they’ve already grown up.
As for me, I tend to do up hair,wash feet and cut fingernails for my parents. By doing what my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they devote to bringing me up. Also, being eighteen years old means it’s time that I should take responsibility to take care of them.

試題分析：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。