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11．現(xiàn)在，社會上存在一種現(xiàn)象，越來越多的中國人喜歡過"洋節(jié)"．昨天我們班進(jìn)行了一次討論---是否我們應(yīng)該過洋節(jié)？

贊成的理由   （35%的學(xué)生）	1．隨著科技的發(fā)展，世界已經(jīng)成了一個地球村； 2．有助于了解其他國家的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，豐富我們的傳統(tǒng)文化； …
反對的理由   （60%的學(xué)生）	1．浪費錢； 2．自己國家的傳統(tǒng)和習(xí)俗要傳承下去； …
你的看法	…

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
 2．可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫；
 3．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Nowadays，there appears a phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festivals or not．
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Answer 1

分析 本文屬正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是對"中國人該不該過洋節(jié)"的不同觀點，題目給出了大部分要點，也要考生給出自己的觀點．文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對的觀點，然后是贊同的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化．難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的．在寫作的時候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體．
【亮點說明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，觀點明確，有不少好句子和短語：focus too much on"太關(guān)注"，be familiar to"為…熟悉"，As far as I'm concerned"據(jù)我所知"，60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．這句話用了it做形式主語，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．這句話用了固定句型，As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．這句話用了非限制性定語從句．還有范文使用了Besides，這樣的詞，使文章更加連貫．
60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．（高分句型一）
As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．（高分句型二）
As far as I'm concerned，if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays，there appears a phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festivals or not．Opinions are divided on this issue．
      60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．（高分句型一） Besides，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．
      However，35% of the students argue that it's a natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals．As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has，in fact，become a global village．（高分句型二）Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us．
      As far as I'm concerned，if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．