Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Failure is annoying, but what failure can teach us may never be taught in other ways．

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；

④文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

No one can ever achieve any success without failure, as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are.

When I was in Junior High School, most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science, saying that it promised a better future. I tried to follow this trend despite the fact that I was not good at Physics. It was only two months later, when I failed an extremely important Physics exam, that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese, English as well as History. I switched for arts immediately.

The following years witnessed my excellent school performance then. So failure is not as terrible as we have expected as long as we can learn something from it.

【解析】

試題分析：失敗是令人厭煩的，但是失敗對我們的教育意義是無法替代的。根據(jù)提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。無須寫標(biāo)題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文中對于英文提示換了一種表達(dá)方式，但是達(dá)到了同樣的效果。failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are. 多種形式表達(dá)同一種意思，避免重復(fù)，符合題目要求，可以使文章變化多樣，避免單調(diào)乏味，更重要的是起到啟下的作用；范文中使用了較多的語法知識，原因狀語從句as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are，時間狀語從句When I was in Junior High School，動作分詞做狀語saying that it promised a better future，定語從句the fact that I was not good at Physics，強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was only two months later that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese。原因狀語從句、時間狀語從句、動作分詞做狀語、定語從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等語法的使用提升了文章的檔次，同時也顯示較高的語法知識點(diǎn)使用能力；范文中注意使用了extremely， immediately等副詞，switched，witness等動詞，顯示了豐富的詞匯量，表意更精準(zhǔn)，提升了文章的檔次；范文中使用了一些固定短語：promise a better future，follow this trend，be good at，lay in等，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)完整。

考點(diǎn):材料類作文