Question

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假如你是高中三年級的學生李華，你在學校組織了一項“有煩惱向誰說”的調查活動。

請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關情況。內容包括：調查結果（如下圖所示）、持相應想法的理由及你對調查結果的看法。

注意：1．信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計人總詞數(shù)

2．詞數(shù)為80左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---"To whom do you go when in trouble?" The results are as follows.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Reference version:

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows.

61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business. They find it hard to get along with others.

It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example. However, some general comments can be made. It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.

【解析】 本文是應用文，要求學生怎樣訴說煩惱談自己的看法，故應用一般現(xiàn)在時和第一人稱。

文章使用了一般現(xiàn)在時兼有靈活使用連詞等，且使用得當，足見作者語言功底。文中使用了when引導的時間狀語從句，which引導的非限制性定語從句，that引導的表語從句，find it +形容詞 +不定式的結構應用等；高級短語base on，be rich in等；還使用了Nevertheless，however等關聯(lián)詞以及It is +形容詞 +不定式句型的靈活運用。全文靈活應用各類復雜語法知識，要點陳述全，和前后連貫。文章一氣呵成，堪稱佳作。