【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Several American students visited our school. Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to them, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it. I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.

【答案】

【1】our--their

【2】them--whom

【3】compared--comparing

【4】photo前加上the

【5】去掉that

【6】had enjoyed--enjoyed

【7】act--acted

【8】along--around

【9】take--taken

【10】when--before

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】文中第二句。通過(guò)上一句可知，一些美國(guó)學(xué)生要來(lái)參觀我們學(xué)校，故此句應(yīng)是，他們一到達(dá)，而不是我們一到達(dá)。所以把our改成their。

【2】文中第二句�？疾槎ㄕZ(yǔ)從句。此句為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為them，在從句中擔(dān)當(dāng)among的賓語(yǔ)，故用whom。

【3】文中第三句�？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。此句為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞擔(dān)當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)，和主語(yǔ)I之間存在主動(dòng)發(fā)出的關(guān)系，故用comparing，而不是compared。

【4】文中第三句�？疾楣谠~的用法。在此句中，名詞photo后有定語(yǔ)從句修飾，故為特指，需要加冠詞the。

【5】文中第四句�？疾橘e語(yǔ)從句的連接詞。在本句中，expressed之后為賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句的連接詞不可重復(fù)使用，故that和how只可以選擇一個(gè)。根據(jù)后面的excited，可知用how，所以去掉that。

【6】文中第六句。根據(jù)上文的prepared可知，本句時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)而非過(guò)去完成時(shí)。所以把had enjoyed改成enjoyed。

【7】文中第七句。根據(jù)上文可知，整件事都是發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，所以應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。所以把a(bǔ)ct改成acted。

【8】文中第七句�？疾槎陶Z(yǔ)show around意為帶領(lǐng)某人參觀某地。并沒(méi)有show along的搭配，故把a(bǔ)long改成around。

【9】文中倒數(shù)第三句�？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。在本句中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞擔(dān)當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，構(gòu)成結(jié)構(gòu) have sth. done，意為讓…被…。此句中，photo和take之間存在被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故把take改成taken。

【10】文中倒數(shù)第二句。此句考查連詞的用法。句意為：在我們還沒(méi)有意識(shí)到時(shí)，分別的時(shí)刻已經(jīng)到來(lái)。而能夠表示“沒(méi)來(lái)及就…”這個(gè)意思的連詞不是when而是before。故把when改成before。

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