Question

【題目】假設你是李華，David是你的美國網(wǎng)友。他對目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關注，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。 主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.感謝他的關注。

2.簡介霧霾 （smog） 天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害。

3.談談你的感想。

注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；開頭與結尾已寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)：100左右

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

Yours，Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：主要內(nèi)容如下： 1.感謝他的關注。2.簡介霧霾 （smog） 天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害。3.談談你的感想。注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；開頭與結尾已寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)：100左右。

亮點說明：本文用了以第一人稱為主的寫作方式，開門見山的說明了要點；用了副詞，短語等詞分點寫出了自己的建議。以我為人稱，寫出霧霾帶來的危害，和我們的感想，并且提出建議。文章不華麗，卻樸實，字數(shù)也在要求的范圍內(nèi)。