Question

英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下便條為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。便條中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meet was great success. It was why we were all making every effort for our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud in what we had done. Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping

Answer 1

【小題1】recentlyàrecent
【小題2】holding àheld
【小題3】attendàattending
【小題4】finishesàfinished
【小題5】去掉down
【小題6】They àWe
【小題7】great 前面加a
【小題8】why àbecause
【小題9】winneràwinners
【小題10】proud in à proud of

解析試題分析：
【小題1】recentlyàrecent 用形容詞recent修飾名詞news.
【小題2】holding àheld  本句是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，指運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)被舉行。使用過去分詞的形式。
【小題3】attendàattending 因?yàn)榍昂笮纬芍鲃?dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)修飾students and teachers.
【小題4】finishesàfinished; 本句是描述過去所發(fā)生的事情，使用過去時(shí)即可。
【小題5】去掉down 打破記錄break the record. Break down機(jī)器出故障，拋錨；身體垮掉。
【小題6】They àWe   根據(jù)句意我們都很興奮。
【小題7】great 前面加a    success這里指一件成功的事情，故使用a修飾。
【小題8】why àbecause    because后面的從句表示原因。Why的后面的從句表示結(jié)果。本句后面表示的是原因，故改為because
【小題9】winneràwinners   one of后面要接名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題10】proud in à proud of 固定詞組be proud of對(duì)…感到自豪。
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