Question

假如你叫王凱，是學校國際班學生，上周五晚從樓梯摔下造成左腳受傷。雖手術及時，但仍須在家中休養(yǎng)一月。請你按以下要點給你的老師Mr．Smith寫一封信：

1．請假并說明原因，表達歉意；

2．詢問病假期間的學習方式；

3．表達個人愿望。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右;

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

Dear Mr. Smith．

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Yours sincerely,

Wang Kai

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m so sorry to say that I have to stay away from school for some time, because I hurt my left leg when I was going downstairs last Friday evening. Fortunately, I was given an immediate operation, but the doctor told me that I had to stay in bed for a month. What a long time!

So, what can I do during this long absence from you and other teachers and classmates? I’m really worried about the lessons, and I’ll feel lonely without you. What can I do, Mr. Smith?

I’m looking forward to your reply, and I hope I can get back to school as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Kai

【解析】這是一封請假信寫作，主要圍繞請假的原因，以及詢問期間學習方式的問題，既然是請假信，考生注意語言簡潔為主。本文采用經(jīng)典三段論式寫法。第一段闡述請假原因，第二段詢問學習方法，第三段表達期望，結構清晰了然。第一段第一句,because I hurt my left leg when I was going downstairs last Friday evening.使用了when領導的時間狀語從句；第一段最后一句What a long time!使用了一個感嘆句，使得文章頓時生動有趣。第二段第一句what can I do during this long absence from you and other teachers and classmates?雖然句式簡單，但使用疑問句形式，使得文章多了一絲可愛的意味。在短語使用上，使用了stay away from離開，be looking forward to期待等短語，短語雖使用不多，貴在使用十分適宜恰當。在詞語使用上，在第一段第二句Fortunately, I was given an immediate operation，用Fortunately一個副詞單獨成句；第二段第二句中I’m really worried about the lessons用了一個really加強語氣，充分展現(xiàn)了作者對學業(yè)的擔憂�？偨Y：遇到這類寫作時盡量簡潔，不需要太過復雜的句式，注意要分對象，選擇文章風格。

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