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12．為了吸引更多的留學(xué)生到你校學(xué)習(xí)，校學(xué)生會(huì)決定拍攝一部反映學(xué)校生活的小電影，現(xiàn)在招募學(xué)生演員．請你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，根據(jù)以下提示撰寫一個(gè)通知．
（1）此次活動(dòng)的目的；
（2）演員需要具備的條件：溝通能力強(qiáng)，擅長英語…（可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）；
（3）小電影的內(nèi)容簡介；
（4）最后報(bào)名期限：下周一前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
（3）通知格式己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
NOTICE
In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
If you want to show your talent in this film，you need to have some related qualities．First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二） Besides，you must be good at English，especially spoken English．What's more，if you have ever participated in similar activities before，it will be an advantage．
The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三） If you are interested in this activity，please sign up for it at the Students'Union before next Monday．We are expecting your participation and contribution．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息為了吸引更多的留學(xué)生到你校學(xué)習(xí)，校學(xué)生會(huì)決定拍攝一部反映學(xué)校生活的小電影，現(xiàn)在招募學(xué)生演員．請你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，根據(jù)以下提示撰寫一個(gè)通知，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）此次活動(dòng)的目的；（2）演員需要具備的條件：溝通能力強(qiáng)，擅長英語…（可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）；（3）小電影的內(nèi)容簡介；（4）最后報(bào)名期限：下周一前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in order to 以便，為了；first of all首先；besides另外；what's more而且；sign up 報(bào)名；
In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
 First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二
  The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三）

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      In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
      If you want to show your talent in this film，you need to have some related qualities．First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二） Besides，you must be good at English，especially spoken English．What's more，if you have ever participated in similar activities before，it will be an advantage．
      The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三） If you are interested in this activity，please sign up for it at the Students'Union before next Monday．We are expecting your participation and contribution．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       The Students'Union

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．