Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，你在網(wǎng)上看到你所在城市的一個英語培訓(xùn)中心擬招收暑期助教，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一封英語申請信。

內(nèi)容包括：1．申請原因；

2．自我優(yōu)勢（口語能力，組織能力，溝通能力）；

3．希望獲準(zhǔn)。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右：

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：助教 teaching assistant

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. ______________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position.

In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself. Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently. Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent,” and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperate well in a team.

I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，你在網(wǎng)上看到你所在城市的一個英語培訓(xùn)中心擬招收暑期助教，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一封英語申請信。內(nèi)容包括：1．申請原因；2．自我優(yōu)勢（口語能力，組織能力，溝通能力）；3．希望獲準(zhǔn)。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右： 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position.現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語；In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself.動詞不定式做目的狀語；Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English.過去分詞做原因狀語，并和原因狀語從句在同一復(fù)合句中；Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently.動名詞短語作主語，同時句中還用了非限制性定語從句；I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.含條件句的固定句式；另外，Besides, Most importantly,的運用，顯得文章層次分明，上下線接緊湊。