Question

【題目】近年來(lái)大城市交通擁堵嚴(yán)重，影響了人們的生活和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，對(duì)此人們十分抱怨。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給報(bào)社寫封信。

1. 交通現(xiàn)狀及影響；

2. 提出改進(jìn)建議；

3. 希望建議被采納。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some pieces of advice.

For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For another, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, which can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles. Besides, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信類作文，要求給報(bào)社寫一封信，主要要求有：1. 交通現(xiàn)狀及影響；2. 提出改進(jìn)建議；3. 希望建議被采納。需要注意的有：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文用了書(shū)信應(yīng)該用的格式，用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，將來(lái)時(shí)等的時(shí)態(tài)穿插。用了For one thing和For another等時(shí)間詞匯，條理清楚的寫出了各種要點(diǎn)，并且自己也寫出了觀點(diǎn)