閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Social practice has been more and more popular in schools. Senior school students are asked to get involved in the community and get some ideas of it.

Surely, social practice does good to senior school students in many ways. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to get in touch with society and deal with different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some precious social experience, which will be of great use to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work. Thus, it enables students to get to know themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money. Consequently, they will neglect their studies. At the same time, through social practice, some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future values.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“社會(huì)實(shí)踐”談?wù)勀愕目捶,?nèi)容包括:

1) 你對(duì)于社會(huì)實(shí)踐的認(rèn)識(shí);

2) 你或你朋友所經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐;

3) 認(rèn)為如何協(xié)調(diào)好學(xué)習(xí)與社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語(yǔ)篇連貫。

 

 

 

 

The passage states the benefits and the problems of social practice for senior school students. It enriches students’ social experience, allows them to know themselves better and rewards them with money, but it may affect their studies and values.

Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it. Nowadays, more students have opportunities to join in various social activities, including military training, voluntary work in a community service, a part-time job in a supermarket, etc. They learn how to serve, how to cooperate and how to solve problems. Gradually they will become strong-willed, kind-hearted and enthusiastic in study and life.

Two years ago, I organized a team of classmates to a Charity House where orphans and the disabled live. There we told stories to the blind, we drew beautiful pictures for the deaf, we helped friends in the wheelchair go around. It was the visit that made me realize that helping others should not be only an empty talk and that life is worth cherishing.

Of course, we must strike a balance between study and social practice, never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork. After all, senior school stage is a vital period for students to obtain knowledge and get prepared for their future. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we make full use of our spare time and holiday to participate in that. Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求用約30個(gè)詞概括短文的主要內(nèi)容,再用約120個(gè)詞寫(xiě)一篇作文,談?wù)剬?duì)“社會(huì)實(shí)踐”的看法。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括:對(duì)社會(huì)實(shí)踐的認(rèn)識(shí);你或朋友的一次實(shí)踐經(jīng)歷;如何協(xié)調(diào)好學(xué)習(xí)與社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系等三個(gè)方面。作文不能直接引用短文的內(nèi)容,可以寫(xiě)親身經(jīng)歷,也可以寫(xiě)虛構(gòu)的故事;不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校的名字;不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:

范文首先用約三十個(gè)詞概括短文大意。短文主要講的是中學(xué)生參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的利與弊。參與社會(huì)實(shí)踐能夠豐富學(xué)生的社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn),更好地了解自我,同時(shí)還能得到一定的報(bào)酬;但是社會(huì)實(shí)踐可能會(huì)影響學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和價(jià)值觀。

范文涵蓋了所有寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),并注意語(yǔ)句的連貫性,也進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣;范文還使用了定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝等語(yǔ)法知識(shí),具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

語(yǔ)法方面:定語(yǔ)從句where orphans and the disabled live;強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was the visit that made me realize...;賓語(yǔ)從句that helping others should not be only an empty talk;虛擬語(yǔ)氣that we make full use of our spare time;倒裝Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.等,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底,語(yǔ)法知識(shí)運(yùn)用嫻熟,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用nowadays, gradually, two years ago, of course, after all, therefore等來(lái)銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面:范文使用了the key to, have opportunities to do, join in, go around, is worth doing, strike a balance between...and, take priority over, get prepared for, participate in等短語(yǔ)和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得更加充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn):材料作文

 

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