Question

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 so—because

 look—looking

 加the

 am—was

 去掉to

 danger--dangerous

 glass--glasses

 something---anything

 for--as

 frightening—frightened

【解析】

試題分析：文章講述了我很怕水，并說明了三個原因，因為媽媽怕水，所以媽媽教導(dǎo)我說水是危險的東西，二是我的眼睛在五歲的時候出了毛病，摘下眼睛在水下什么也看不到，三是我的鄰居被淹死了，也增加了我對水的恐懼。

 so—because 連詞的用法。我不會游泳，因為我對水有恐懼感，故應(yīng)改為because.

 look—looking現(xiàn)在分詞的用法。回顧我的童年，有三個方面的原因可以解釋，這里是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，故應(yīng)改為現(xiàn)在分詞。

 加the冠詞的用法。有三個原因可以解釋我對水的恐懼，所以這里的恐懼應(yīng)是特指加the.

 am—was 時態(tài)的用法。我小的時候，不被允許去水的附近，講的是小時候的事情，故應(yīng)改為was.

 去掉to 動詞用法的考查。句意為：把水看作危險的東西，see sth as ,sth的前面不需要to,故應(yīng)去掉。

 danger--dangerous考查詞性的用法。something dangerous 危險的東西，故應(yīng)改為dangerous.

 glass—glasses名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的考查。這里作眼睛講，就用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

 something---anything考查代詞的用法。something 用于肯定句中而anything用于否定句中，所以應(yīng)改為anything.

 for—as介詞的用法。作為一個小孩兒，我第一次看見了我的鄰居被淹死了，故應(yīng)改為as.

 frightening—frightened分詞用法的考查。frightening 用來修飾物，而frightened用來修飾人。故應(yīng)改為frightened.

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