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17．假如你是李華，近日你的英國網友Mary發(fā)郵件告訴你，為了參加學校廣播站的面試她做了長時間準備，但面試失敗，她現(xiàn)在心情沮喪．請你回復郵件安慰和鼓勵她，并提出一些建議．
注意：1 字數100詞左右．
2 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文更連貫．
3 開頭和結尾已給出．（不計入總詞數）
Dear Mary，
I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
I hope you will be happy again．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據提示信息你的英國網友Mary發(fā)郵件告訴你，為了參加學校廣播站的面試她做了長時間準備，但面試失敗，她現(xiàn)在心情沮喪．請你回復郵件安慰和鼓勵她，并提出一些建議，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：due to 由于；Actually事實上；are supposed to 應該；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；
  I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）
  It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
       I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
      You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
       I hope you will be happy again．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．