Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按要求以Our Life Rests on Our Choice為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

Life is a matter of choice. Seemingly, it means a choice of concrete (具體的) things. But in fact, it means choosing a way of life. Life is to be lived and enjoyed, not to be wasted or complained about.

Hardly can we forget the time when our society faced the threat from the life-and death disease— SARS. Yet, even during those dreadful times, some suffering people remained optimistic. Instead of wearing white masks, some people turned to colorful ones, and thus displayed a happy mood. And some creative people dubbed SARS to mean “SMILE AND REMAIN SMILING.” People who survive these kinds of circumstances decide in their minds to carry on in spite of the hardships.

Although we cannot choose our appearance, inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities (逆境), we do have the right to choose to live optimistically, to love our lives, to have dreams, and to cherish hopes.

Every morning when we get up, we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文的概要；

用約120個(gè)詞就“Our Life Rests on Our Choice” 談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺埽瑑?nèi)容包括：

（1）簡(jiǎn)要敘述你對(duì)“Our Life Rests on Our Choice”的理解；

（2）請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明你會(huì)選擇怎樣的人生態(tài)度；

（3）簡(jiǎn)要敘述你這樣選擇的理由。（至少2點(diǎn)）

【寫(xiě)作要求】 1. 闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Our Life Rests on Our Choice

Faced with disasters and adversities, some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships. Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.

Life is full of ups and downs. When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude. A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship, which offers us the right direction.

As a teenager, it is of great significance to take a positive attitude towards life. To stay energetic, I will stick to an exercise schedule. I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others, becoming socially connected. All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man. Only by doing so can I fit in society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life. (150 word)

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作。共分兩個(gè)任務(wù)：第一個(gè)任務(wù)用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文的概要；第二個(gè)任務(wù)用約120個(gè)單詞就“Our Life Rests on Our Choice”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺�，第二部分給出了寫(xiě)作提綱，三大要點(diǎn)是中心。注意完成第一任務(wù)時(shí)，語(yǔ)言使用應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)練、準(zhǔn)確、到位。在第二個(gè)任務(wù)中，應(yīng)涵蓋題目所列出的三大要點(diǎn)。本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文中出現(xiàn)了很多值得參考借鑒的句子，比如：Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.，采用插入語(yǔ)的形式，使簡(jiǎn)單的句子變得具有深意，增添了幾分靈動(dòng)性；When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude.時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加連貫；Only by doing so can I fit in society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life.部分倒裝精彩體現(xiàn)；還有很多較具有參考價(jià)值的句子。同時(shí)文中運(yùn)用了大量的好詞匯好好詞組，比如，To stay energetic, is full of ups and downs，of great significance等，這些詞匯短語(yǔ)美化升級(jí)了文章內(nèi)容。