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在某學(xué)校門口及附近，上學(xué)和放學(xué)時(shí)候交通常常擁擠甚至堵塞，給師生、家長(zhǎng)及市民帶來許多不便，很多人為些擔(dān)憂．作為一名該校學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給某英語報(bào)社寫信反映該情況，內(nèi)容包括：
1．交通擁擠的原因；
2．提出至少兩條建議．
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1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
I'm Li Hua，s student of Senior 3．I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate．With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate，causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．【高分句型一】Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems．（交通擁擠的原因） So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken．【高分句型二】First，we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars，which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well．It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others．Besides，cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate．（提出建議）
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon．（提出希望）
Yours，
Li Hua

分析 這是一篇反映學(xué)校門口及附近，上學(xué)和放學(xué)時(shí)候交通常常擁擠問題的信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明寫信目的；二交通擁擠的原因；三提出建議；四提出希望．
高分句型：
1．With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate，causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．句子里With so many parents coming to pick up their children是with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，做原因狀語；causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．是非謂語動(dòng)詞做結(jié)果狀語；as well as 表示"也包括"．
因?yàn)槟敲炊嗉议L(zhǎng)來接孩子，學(xué)校附近經(jīng)常有交通阻塞，給學(xué)生，老師和路人造成許多不便．
2．So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken．句子里recommend的賓語從句some effective and urgent measures be taken的謂語動(dòng)詞用should+動(dòng)詞原形，should可以省略．
因此我強(qiáng)烈建議應(yīng)該采取一些有效和緊急的措施．

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm Zhang Xiaoming，a student from Grade 3．I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate．（點(diǎn)明寫信目的）
With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate，causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．【高分句型一】Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems．（交通擁擠的原因） So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken．【高分句型二】First，we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars，which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well．It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others．Besides，cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate．（提出建議）
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon．（提出希望）
Yours，
Zhang Xiaoming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
這是一篇議論文，議論性作文的結(jié)構(gòu)：1．開門見山地點(diǎn)明所要闡述的內(nèi)容．2．分析不同的觀點(diǎn)：可采用分類式或?qū)Ρ仁�，并闡明理由．要注意層次清楚條理清晰．3．歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評(píng)論．考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)．不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次．

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