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16．假定你是李華，正在一所美國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)英文．你對學(xué)校中國藝術(shù)俱樂部 （Chinese Art Club） 很感興趣，決定申請加入．現(xiàn)給該俱樂部負責(zé)人寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：
1、表示有意加入；  2、介紹自己繪畫特長；  3、說明性格優(yōu)勢； 4、期待滿意答復(fù)．
注意：①詞數(shù)：100左右；
②可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
③文章起始句和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir/Madam．
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school．
I'm interested in Music Club at Weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（表示有意加入）
I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．【高分句型一】Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well．（介紹音樂特長）As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．【高分句型二】（說明性格優(yōu)勢）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!（期待滿意答復(fù)）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li  Hu．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用用第一人稱敘述，時態(tài)是以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括：1、表示有意加入；2、介紹音樂特長；3、說明性格優(yōu)勢；4、期待滿意答復(fù)．
高分句型：
1．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．
句子里 have been playing 是現(xiàn)在完成進行時，表示"我一直在練琴"；more than 表示"超過"．
十多年來，我一直在練琴，我曾經(jīng)在全國比賽中得了第三名．
2 As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．．
句子里As for 表示"關(guān)于，至于"；above all表示"最重要的是"．
至于我的性格，我自認為是思想開放的，友好的，容易相處的，最重要的是，我真的喜歡和來自全世界的人交朋友．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam． 
       I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school． I'm interested in Music Club at Weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（表示有意加入）
      I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition．【高分句型一】Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well．（介紹音樂特長）As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．【高分句型二】（說明性格優(yōu)勢）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!（期待滿意答復(fù)） 
        Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li  Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．