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1．This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank．An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank．Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down．To make things bad，his money was lying in all direction．In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there，not know what to do．Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked．The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed．To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in your life．It's true what honesty is more important than money!

Answer 1

分析 本文作者通過講述今天早上在上學(xué)的路碰到的一件好人好事，旨在說明現(xiàn)在在我們的生活中有很多的好人，并且誠實確實要比金錢更重要．

解答 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by
what I saw outside a bank．An old man was counting his
money in the front of the bank．Suddenly a young man came
running and knocked him down．To make things bad，his money
was lying in all direction．In no time the people aroundrushto
pick the money up while the old man stood there，notknowwhat
to do．Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just
picked∧．The old man counted the money again and found that
not a single bill was missed．To my great joy，there are now
a lot of nice people inyourlife．It's true what honesty is more
important than money!

詳解：
1．deep改為deeply     考查副詞   此處用來修飾動詞 moved，故用副詞deeply．
2．去掉front 之前的the   考查固定短語   in front of 意為：在…的前面；故去掉front 之前的the．
3．bad改為worse    考查固定搭配    to make things worse意為：使事情更糟糕的是；故用worse．
4．direction改為directions   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   此處指的是：所有方向；應(yīng)使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；故用directions．
5．rush改為rushed  考查時態(tài)  根據(jù)上文可知，此處指的是發(fā)生在今天早上的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時；故用rushed．
6．know改為knowing   考查現(xiàn)在分詞   此處在句中作伴隨狀語，動詞know與其邏輯主語the old man 構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，表示正在進行的動作；故用現(xiàn)在分詞knowing．
7．picked之后加up   考查固定短語   pick up意為：撿起；故在picked之后加up．
8．missed改為missing   考查現(xiàn)在分詞   此處在句中作表語，說明主語bill（指物）的情況，應(yīng)使用由現(xiàn)在分詞轉(zhuǎn)化來的形容詞，故用missing．
9．your改為our   考查人稱的一致性   本句的意思是：令我高興的是，現(xiàn)在在我們的生活中有很多的好人；此處與前面的人稱 my 相呼應(yīng)，指的是：在我們的生活中，故用our． 
10．what改為that  考查固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)    It's+形容詞+that從句；其中it是形式主語，真正的主語是that從句；故用that．

點評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯詞．常見的錯誤有：1 詞法錯誤，主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強調(diào)句等錯誤．解答此類試題時，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進行作答．