Question

6．某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社開展以"Parents and Children"為題的看圖作文征文活動(dòng)，要求根據(jù)以下圖畫用英語(yǔ)寫一篇作文，文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：①11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情；②你個(gè)人的感受．請(qǐng)你寫一篇向報(bào)社投稿的征文．注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右，征文題目已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；2．短文要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫類寫作，要求我們仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫成自己的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情；作者的感受．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情．第二部分為作者的感受．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be occupied in 忙于
prepare for  準(zhǔn)備
How come？怎么會(huì)呢？
from the bottom of heart從心底
高分句型一：Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞feeling作伴隨狀語(yǔ)
高分句型二：However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．此句用了 However引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Parents and Children
On the evening of November 15th，Li Hua was watching TV while his mother was occupied in  preparing for dinner in the kitchen．How attentive he was watching the TV program when the telephone rang．It was from his grandmother，who wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother．"Today is my mother's birthday？"Li Hua was a little puzzle．"How come that I have forgotten all about it？"Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed．（高分句型一）（ 11月15日發(fā)生在李華家的事情）
At the story，I got deeply shocked．It is not easy for parents to bring us up．It is our parents who give us lots of love as well as much care，while we don't care for them enough．Now it's never too late to realize this and show our love and care for them．However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．（高分句型二） （作者的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．