Question

下圖描繪的是某家心理診療所醫(yī)生正向病人介紹治病良方的漫畫。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。

要點(diǎn)提示：描述漫畫內(nèi)容；結(jié)合實(shí)際，簡(jiǎn)述自己的理解與啟發(fā)。
注意：1.陳述所給要點(diǎn)，可適度發(fā)揮。
　　2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。
　　3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Answer 1

What is vividly betrayed is that a person was persuaded into a small cage, who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way. Additionally, the cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns.
In accordance to my understanding, the picture describes a person with some mental disability, as a result of which, he prefers to stay in large spaces with others’ company. Doctorsdown, who suppose it more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them, are professional, trying all their out to help the person. Instead of offering him medicine, they had their unique way of treating this patient, pushing him face his problems directly.
From my perspective, life is coated with ups and downs. It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should wedodge challenges or avoid responsibility. Quite the contrary, it behooves us to face them with courage and wisdom.

解析試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)摰男睦碓\療所醫(yī)生正向病人介紹治病良方的漫畫，看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 What is vividly betrayed is that a person was persuaded into a small cage, who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way.這句話有定語從句，主語從句和表語從句， the cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns. 這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， In accordance to my understanding, the picture describes a person with some mental disability, as a result of which, he prefers to stay in large spaces with others’ company.這句話也是定語從句， Doctorsdown, who suppose it more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them, are professional, trying all their out to help the person. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語和it做形式賓語，Instead of offering him medicine, they had their unique way of treating this patient, pushing him face his problems directly. 這句話也是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should wedodge challenges or avoid responsibility.這句話是it做形式主語的句子，還有文章還使用 Quite the contrary. Additionally,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
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