Question

【題目】 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

（1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第l1處起）不計分。

I have always dreamt returning to my childhood. Just as many people say, childhood is the happier time in one’s life.

I grow up in the countryside. There are many high mountains, colorful flowers and different kind of trees. Often my parents took me to go hiking and caught insects. My grandma, whose seemed to be full of vivid memories, always shared his stories with me. She told me that I was such gentle and quiet that she never felt worrying about me. Now it is 5 years since that she passed away. I still miss her very much!

Answer 1

【答案】I have always dreamt returning to my childhood. Just as many people say, childhood is the time in one’s life.

I up in the countryside. There are many high mountains, colorful flowers and different of trees. Often my parents took me to go hiking and insects. My grandma, seemed to be full of vivid memories, always shared stories with me. She told me that I was gentle and quiet that she never felt about me. Now it is 5 years since she passed away. I still miss her very much!

【解析】

第一處：dreamt后加of/about 考查介詞的用法。dreamt后加of/about。

第二處：happier→happiest 考查形容詞比較等級的用法。表示＂一生中最快樂的時光＂要用最高級。

第三處：grow→grew 考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)語境，此處應(yīng)用過去式grew。

第四處：kind→kinds 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的用法。由different修飾，此處用復(fù)數(shù)名詞。

第五處：caught→catch 考查動詞不定式的用法。go和catch是and連接的兩個并列結(jié)構(gòu)，要保持形式一致。

第六處：whose→who 考查定語從句關(guān)系詞的用法。此處是非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，先行詞是My grandma，因此用關(guān)系代詞who。

第七處：his→her 考查代詞的用法。文章一直是以祖母第三人稱She敘述的。故把his改為her。

第八處：so→such 考查副詞的用法。so修飾形容詞或副詞。

第九處：worrying→worried 考查非謂語動詞的用法。此處說人的狀態(tài)，用worried。

第十處：去掉that 考查連詞的用法。it is +時間段+since 從句，that多余，故去掉。