Question

A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn’t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.

In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.

People with morals (who don’t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but they don’t deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave worse.

The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice?

This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.

If cruel and rude acts are rooted in children’s hearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values, neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.

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1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點。

2. 以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓�這一事件的看法,內(nèi)容包括:

(1) 讀完這則新聞,你有什么感受?

(2) 假如你是車上的一名乘客,你會怎樣做?

(3) 就如何創(chuàng)建和諧社會提出你的建議。

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1. 你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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Answer 1

The news is about a young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which leads to a debate about who is right and who is wrong.

I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite. It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.

Today in our society，many other people would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus, as the morality requires. However,if I were a passenger on the crowded bus，I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability. So it is still a long way for us to build up a harmonious society. In my opinion, we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it from happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized society.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是由“殘疾人是否應(yīng)該給孕婦讓座”引出的話題。要點都給了出來。本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如However, so, so as to, and,等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 lead to, do harm to, take it for granted, in need of, build up等以提升文章的檔次分。

【亮點說明】：本文中的高級結(jié)構(gòu)還是較多的，如The news is about a young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which leads to a debate about who is right and who is wrong.中的定語從句。It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.此句運用定語從句。However,if I were a passenger on the crowded bus，I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.運用虛擬語氣。

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