Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一（1）班的學(xué)生李華，下面四幅圖描述了你周末生活方式變化的經(jīng)過。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�“英語園地”寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】I used to play computer games almost every weekend. Computer games were so appealing to me that I was totally addicted to it. After some time, my eyesight became weak. Meanwhile, I gained a lot of weight. With the situation getting worse, I had to go to see a doctor. The doctor gave me a physical examination and I had my eyes examined as well. The doctor advised me to do some exercise in the open air as much as possible. To improve my health, I accepted his advice and began to ride bicycle every weekend. And now I’m feeling much better.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于看圖作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為看圖作文；假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一（1）班的學(xué)生李華，下面四幅圖描述了你周末生活方式變化的經(jīng)過。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�“英語園地”寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于60。人稱使用第一人稱。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：used to；appeal to；be addicted to；have my eyes examined；as much as possible等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。