Question

15．如今人們越來越關(guān)注身體的健康．作為中學(xué)生，我們也應(yīng)該知道如何保持身體健康．請你根據(jù)以下提示，為《21世紀(jì)英文報》寫一篇題為"The way to keep healthy"的文章．
1 盡量少吃含脂肪和糖分的食物，多吃水果和蔬菜，保證飲食平衡．
2每天參加一定量的滑動，以增強體質(zhì)．
3保持良好的生活習(xí)慣．
要求：1．請包括以上要點，但不要逐句翻譯；
2．可以適當(dāng)擴充內(nèi)容，以使文章流暢和連貫；
 3．字?jǐn)?shù)為100字左右（題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
The way to keep healthy
Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life．As students，we should know more about how to keep fit．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述．內(nèi)容主要包括：一 點明主題；二保持身體健康的注意事項；三再次強調(diào)．
高分句型：
1．As a proverb says，"An apple a day keeps the doctor away．"句子里as引導(dǎo)定語從句，表示"正如"．
正如諺語所說，每天一個蘋果讓你遠(yuǎn)離醫(yī)生．
2．People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don't．句子里 who 引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞People．
每天跑步的人比不跑步的人有更強大的心臟．

解答 Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life．As students，we should know more about how to keep fit．（點明主題）
      First]y，pay attention to the diet．We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and Iow in fat．As a proverb says，"An apple a day keeps the doctor away．"【高分句型一】So fruit is good for health．Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat，such as butter．Secondly，exercise is necessary．Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat．People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don't．【高分句型二】Finally，form good living habits．We should sleep for about 8 hours at night，and never work too hard．Over work and little sleep will lead to illness．（保持身體健康的注意事項）
     These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy．（再次強調(diào)）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文，一般給的要點比較多，根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)谋硎静⒘�、遞進、因果或轉(zhuǎn)折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接，力求準(zhǔn)確生動、條理清楚．