Question

3．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
One morning，M．Hare was running on the road．Suddenly he saw Mr．Tortoise，who was also running on the road towards him．Mr．Hare an up to Mr．Tortoise and laughed at him．Mr．Tortoise got angry and wouldn't take failure lying down，so he suggested having a ace to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides．Mr．Hare agreed with him without hesitation．The race began．Mr．Hare and Mr．Tortoise stated from the same line at the same time．When Mr．Hare was far ahead couldn't catch up with him．So he stopped and lay down to have a nap．But soon he feel sleep．At the same time．Mr．Tortoise kept on running．When Mr．Hare woke up，he found Mr．Tortoise had already sat under the tree and was smiling at him．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括本文的主要內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個(gè)字寫一篇記敘文，描寫你或你的朋友驕傲而落后的一次經(jīng)歷，并包括以下要點(diǎn)．
A．談?wù)勥@則故事經(jīng)人的啟示；
B．?dāng)⑹瞿愕呐笥岩蝌湴炼�落后的一次真�?shí)或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷
C．談?wù)勥@次經(jīng)歷對(duì)你或你的朋友思想態(tài)度的影響
[寫作要求]
1．可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)組織故事，但不得引用原文中的句子；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：lie down （躺下），have a nap（小睡），as a result（所以），take th seriously（認(rèn)真對(duì)待某事），keep a modest attitude towards（采取一個(gè)謙虛的態(tài)度），be well prepared for （充分準(zhǔn)備），listen to the teacher attentively（認(rèn)真聽老師講課），far behind（落后），from then on（從那時(shí)起）．
【高分句型一】
1．The day I came first in the English exam was the happinest day of my life．
此處是由省略了關(guān)系副詞"that"的定語從句，先行詞為"The day"． 定語從句中不缺少主、賓、表等成分．
【高分句型二】
2．①When the teacher announced that I was the first，I felt so proud②that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer．
①此處是由連詞"When"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，主句為"I felt so proud that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer"．
②此處是由連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，賓語從句中由"and"引導(dǎo)了兩個(gè)并列句．
【高分句型三】
3．During the following few months，I didn't listen to the teacher attentively in class and never did I do my homework after class．
此處是由部分倒裝句型，結(jié)構(gòu)為"否定詞never+一般疑問句形式的句子"．

解答 Pride goes before failure
   The folktale mainly tells us that in a race Mr．Hare proudly thought he would be sure the best Mr．Tortoise and so he lay down to have a nap．As a result，he lost the race．（概括）
   From the story，we learn that we must take everything seriously and keep a modest attitude towards our students or work．Besides，we shouldn't be proud at any time．（啟示）
   The day I came first in the English exam was the happinest day of my life．【高分句型一】I had studied very diligently for many weeks and was well prepared for the exam．When the teacher announced that I was the first，I felt so proud that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer．【高分句型二】During the following few months，I didn't listen to the teacher attentively in class and never did I do my homework after class．【高分句型三】In the next exam，the result was quite different．I felt far behind．（經(jīng)歷）
   From then on，I became modest and never proud again．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)---影響）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．