Question

生活中人們常常需要做出決定，一些決定會對其產(chǎn)生重大影響，請敘述你曾經(jīng)做出的一個對你產(chǎn)生重大影響的決定，并簡要說明你的啟示或感受，用英文寫一篇100－120個詞的短文。

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In life people make many important decisions．

Answer 1

In life people make many important decisions．Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.

My last decision was made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class. Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and put down some important notes. But I was never a good listener. I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me. She made me realize the importance of note taking. Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class. Since then , my English has improved greatly.

From this experience, I have realized a good decision benefits people . We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.

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