Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。下周你校將與英國友好校舉辦一場在線會議, 探討如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語, 請你根據(jù)以下提示撰寫一篇發(fā)言稿：

（1）介紹你是如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語的（至少寫出兩點(diǎn)）

（2）簡單談?wù)勀銓�利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語的看法

（3）請友好校的學(xué)生分享他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié), 使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.

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Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.

First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.

Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語的發(fā)言稿。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：（1）介紹你是如何利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語的（至少寫出兩點(diǎn)）

（2）簡單談?wù)勀銓�利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語的看法

（3）請友好校的學(xué)生分享他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great way; identify; wrong information; share。

第三步：連詞成句

There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.

The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.

Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners.

I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.

I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改