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5．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語，看了電視節(jié)目"中國詩詞大會"（Chinese Poetry Conference）之后，非常喜歡中國詩詞，因而詢問你最喜歡的中國詩人及原因．請就此給他回一封電子郵件．
要點如下：1．你喜歡的詩人；    2．喜歡他的原因；    3．歡迎Jack來訪．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)語已為你寫好．
Dear Jack，
I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply．How are you getting along with your learning Chinese？I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor'smemory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一）I'm excited to learn Chinese poetryinterests you greatly．I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）Well，LiBai，a poet in Tang Dynasty is my favorite．I likehis poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）He stands out among all the Chinese poets．His works have been translated into many languages．By the way，welcome to China and you can experience Chinese cultures in person．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語，看了電視節(jié)目"中國詩詞大會"（Chinese Poetry Conference）之后，非常喜歡中國詩詞，因而詢問你最喜歡的中國詩人及原因．請就此給他回一封電子郵件．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：你喜歡的詩人； 喜歡他的原因；  歡迎Jack來訪   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：get along with 與…相處；事情進展；be eager to渴望做某事；be full of充滿了；stand out杰出；By the way順便說一下；
I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor's memory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一
I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）
I like his poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      How are you getting along with your learning Chinese？I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor's memory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一）I'm excited to learn Chinese poetry interests you greatly．I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）Well，Li Bai，a poet in Tang Dynasty is my favorite．I like his poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）He stands out among all the Chinese poets．His works have been translated into many languages．By the way，welcome to China and you can experience Chinese cultures in person．
      I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．