Question

以 “Protect Wild Animals” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇100字左右的短文。要求包括表格中所列要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章完整通順。
要 點(diǎn)
意義   野生動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān)
現(xiàn)狀   野生動(dòng)物正在被過(guò)度捕殺
后果    a.生態(tài)平衡被破壞
b.人類受到大自然的懲罰
建議    a. 嚴(yán)懲盜獵者
b. 提高環(huán)保意識(shí)
c. 建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)
生詞：1. 自然保護(hù)區(qū)  nature reserve     
2. 生態(tài)平衡   the balance of nature
3. 非法的  illegal             
4.保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物 Protect Wild Animals
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Protect Wild Animals
Wild animals are man’s close friends. They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature.
Unfortunately, they are being over-hunted, and some species are dying out. If it goes on like this, man is to be punished.
In order to stay away from the seemingly faraway disaster, man has to do something. First, effective laws must be passed to give the illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, we must set up nature reserves to provide the animals with comfortable habitats. Third, people’s awareness of environment protection should be raised to a higher level.

試題分析：這篇作文是以表格的形式，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. 這里not only…but also是固定的句型，意思是不僅，而且；Second, we must set up nature reserves to provide the animals with comfortable habitats. provide sb. with sth. 是固定的句型，意思是給某人提供某物。